Brandi J. Clark

Writer and Educator

Let’s Create Reading Beasts!

Picture credit: Prawy

Picture credit: Prawy

 

I believe a teacher needs to develop readers into unyielding beasts.

Let me explain. In school, I loved reading; I reveled in practicing my part for the “round robin” experience. Round robin reading is the term for when all students read copies of the same book, taking turns, reading out loud, usually a paragraph each. But at the age of 9, I discovered what happens when you are not an excellent reader. Michael, a boy in my class, was a struggling reader who had been held back a year earlier. When it was his turn, Michael came to a difficult word. The class waited, ready to jump in to help. Too late, he confused “big onions” for begonias.  There was laughter. At the time it was funny.  I think differently now.

I used to think reading was difficult to teach.  I tried too hard to make it happen, from choosing the students’ books to the aforementioned round robin reading.  I was in control of the process, or so I thought. Maya Angelou says, “When you know better, you do better”.  Now I know better.  I believe a teacher needs to develop readers into unyielding beasts.  I mean this as affectionately as possible.   When I say beast, I envision a voracious reader one that can’t stop because they are on an engaging, personal but very social journey.

Six years ago a student asked me if they could sit somewhere else to read. Usually I said no, but that day, for the first time I said yes!  Over that year the students turned into loveable, reading beasts. I learned that the reading environment is everything.

Beasts do not sit in rows, unless they want to.

They want to read on their stomachs, under desks, by the furnace.

They tell me they like the hum of the furnace motor.

They like different types of lighting and lamps fit the bill nicely.

They want to feel like they are at home.

They tell me:

“I want to eat while I am reading.”

Beasts want to read everything in many shapes and forms.  They want to read on a screen and sometimes they want to listen to stories. Beasts will let you know what they want.

“I want pictures!”  they yell, “And captions and lots of action”.

“I want to laugh!”

“I want to cry and I want to think.”

“I want time to look at books and I want time to talk to my friends about it.”

Often I encounter those who think that struggling readers need more drill and practice. Instead I believe they need the freedom to choose their own books.  They tell me things that they love to read:

“I like to read my gaming manuals and find out cheats.”

“Did you know there is a Doll Island? It says so here in the Guinness Book of World Records.”

Sometimes teachers ask me, “But can you tame a beast?  Surely,” they say, “there has to be some order. They can’t go racing around and causing a stir. “

Yes I have found that there is order but it is not a controlled sense of order. They don’t need much help. Sometimes they need to be taught how to take turns. Other times it is someone who has to remind them that it is time to rest: to leave their thoughts for another day. They need some direction; at times it is to introduce a new tool.

I tell them, “Hey, have a go! “

They love to figure it out on their own. All of a sudden they are marking up the text, keeping track of thoughts on post-its and virtual stickies.

They are voracious readers.  They ask me, “Anything new?”

They are social readers.  They ask me, “My friends and I want to read together, can we share?”

They are home readers. My own children, who are 8 and 9 years old, are well on their way to their own reading journeys, yet still, every night I hear:

“Can you read me a story?”

“Can you make it funny?”

“Can you do those voices?”

Every night, my reading beasts are cozy in their pajamas, their teeth minty fresh when I find them patting a spot frantically beside them.

“But you can read” I tell them.

“Yes we know,” my beasts bounce around me, “but we like when you do it.”

They want to cuddle and read together; alone is fun but together is best.

I know I have done my job when I trip over a pile of books, remnants from a reading party.

So can you tame an unyielding beast?

Yes!  By telling them everything and making it happen, “just so”.  But you don’t want to do that!

No?

No you want them to make their own wild decisions and try everything until they find their own “just so”.  In the end it is the beasts that are our future. They are the ones that need to share their wild ideas. It is their wild ideas that continue to create waves; to make changes for the better. It is in the wild world that they live in and they should be beasts of their own domain.

I think back to grade 4.  Michael the reader would have spilled with excitement to read about cars, begonias would not have been picked! The future of literacy is all about our students.  The future Michael would get to choose his books, sit in a favorite spot and listen to reading if he chose to. The future Michael might choose to read with a friend and make a response on his blog.  The future Michael will find his place in the literacy classroom because unyielding beasts are self guided by design.

(Written in April 9,2012 for a graduate assignment…though I STILL believe…)

Until Next Time,

Brandi

Oprah, Earl Spencer, Writing Tip…Oh My!

Every week I settle down to watch “Where are they now?” on OWN.

While reminiscing, I often come away with ideas for living an authentic life.

BUT …this week I was blessed with a writing tip.

I call it “Craft Your Reaction – Like An Earl!”

Earl Spencer was on.  Remember Earl?

Not this one.

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This one.

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Yes, he gave the best  Eulogy at his sister Lady Diana’s funeral.

But what I love about him the most is…he is a writer.

I found an interview with him at Telegraph where he shared this advice.

His best advice ever…

When I worked for NBC, a veteran radio correspondent told me there are only three reactions you want from your audience: “Hey, that’s me; hey, I wish that was me; and hey, I’m glad that’s not me”. – Earl Spencer

What I love… is that this advice helps writers understand ways to craft a connection for their readers.

I see this strategy working naturally or intentionally.

TIP #1:  Write for yourself and hope for a connection. (Naturally)

For example: Here is a story about a kid winning a jelly bean contest.

The Jelly Bean Contest (Sample Story)

        It was the last day of the summer and the Jelly Bean contest drawing was today.  I raced over to the library in the hopes that my name would be called.

         The librarian announced ,”Nelson Henry! Your guess of 750 Jelly Beans was the closest to the actual count of 789. Way to go, you won!”

           I ran home with the jar.

Natural Connections

  • One reader  might remember winning a jelly bean contest and think “Hey, that’s me!”
  • One reader might have lost many jelly bean contests and think. “Hey, I wish that was me.”
  • One reader might have gotten sick from eating too much candy in the past and think, “Hey, I’m glad that’s not me.”

Yet, this is relying on the audience to naturally connect to the story. Which is not bad, it is, what it is.

BUT – I also see this another way.

TIP #2 : Write for yourself but craft the reaction that you want. (Intentionally)

A writer can force  the reaction they want the reader to have by using added details.

Added details – VERSION ONE- The Jelly Bean Contest (Hey, that’s me!)

      It was the last day of the summer and the Jelly Bean contest drawing was today.  I raced over to the library in the hopes that my name would be called.

     The librarian announced ,”Nelson Henry! Your guess of 750 Jelly Beans was the closest to the actual count of 789. Way to go, you won!”

       I ran home with the jar.  I couldn’t wait to show my older brother, he thought the contest was dumb. I would show him.

(The added detail might encourage the reader to relate to the experience of sibling quarrels, past or present)

Added details – VERSION TWO -The Jelly Bean Contest (Hey, I wish that was me!)

        It was the last day of the summer and the Jelly Bean contest drawing was today.  I raced over to the library in the hopes that my name would be called.

        The librarian announced ,”Nelson Henry! Your guess of 750 Jelly Beans was the closest to the actual count of 789. Way to go, you won!”

         I ran home with the jar.  I couldn’t wait to show my older brother, he thought the contest was dumb. I would show him.  When I got home there was a news truck in front of my house.

      “Nelson!” said mom, “Guess what? They want to put you on the news! I guess you are the youngest     patron at the library to win a Jelly Bean contest.”

       My brother came over and smiled, “Not too shabby, Nelson.”

(The added detail might encourage the reader to relate to the excitement of being on the news, “Hey, I wish that was me.”)

Added details – VERSION THREE – The Jelly Bean Contest (Hey, I’m glad it’s not me! )

        It was the last day of the summer and the Jelly Bean contest drawing was today.  I raced over to the library in the hopes that my name would be called.

         The librarian announced ,”Nelson Henry! Your guess of 750 jelly beans was the closest to the actual count of 789. Way to go, you won!”

           I ran home with the jar. As I was turning the corner, a large dog ran into me. The jelly jar flew up in the air. Then the jelly jar crashed down. The jelly beans went every where. As the dog nibbled on them, I sat on the curb and cried.

(The added detail might encourage the reader to sympathize with the character. While there still might be a “Hey, that’s me!” connection, it’s also likely to be a “Hey, I’m glad that’s not me” connection.)

Here’s the tip again.

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Let me know how it works for you.

Talk to you soon,

Brandi